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Describe a sports event you have attended

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I have taken part in a multi-sport event at my school. There were a lot of interesting matches, but the one I like most is the football match between my class’s football team and my school teachers - they invited us to have a match with them. In the end, we lost because we could not compete against them. However, the teachers came and praised our team for excellent sportsmanship and cooperation. Now, whenever I recall that event, I am still proud of my classmates and feel like I was a lucky person to experience such a wonderful event.
I have taken part in a multi-sport
event
at my school. There were
a lot of
interesting matches,
but
the one I like most is the football match between my
class
’s football team and my school teachers
-
they invited us to have a match with them. In the
end
, we lost
because
we could not compete against them.
However
, the teachers came and praised our team for excellent sportsmanship and cooperation.
Now
, whenever I recall that
event
, I am
still
proud of my classmates and feel like I was a lucky person to experience such a wonderful
event
.
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IELTS academic Describe a sports event you have attended

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  American English
1 paragraphs
99 words
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