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the chart shows the expenditures of three car companies on advertising in the uk in 2007

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The bar chart compares the amount money that three car companies spent on different forms of advertising in the UK in 2007. Overall, it can be seen that Cadillac spent the largest amount of money on advertising in 2007. In addition, TV advertisement was the most popular commercial format in all of these companies. Looking at the details, the highest TV advertising expenditure is Cadillac at $70 millions of dollars, followed by Chevrolet at $60 million. Meanwhile, the figure for Acura was slightly smaller than that of Chevroletwith just $50 million. Turning to the data of spending on Cinema advertising, Cadillac spent the most highest of its budget for this commercial than other companies, at 60 million. By contrast, the corresponding figures of Chevrolet and Acura were significant lower with the figures being $15 million and $12 million respectively. In terms of Press advertising, the amount of money spent by Cadillac was again largest, at $55 million. Similarly, the budgets for this commercial of Chevrolet and Acura were nearly the same with $40 million and $39 million.
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In terms of Press advertising, the amount of money
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