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We can see from that chart that it provides information about people and their reviews on Ashdown museum before and after its renovation. It is generally true to say that number of satisfied people have increased and dissatisfied have decreased.

We can see from that chart that it provides information about people and their reviews on Ashdown museum before and after its renovation. It is generally true to say that number of satisfied people have increased and dissatisfied have decreased. o5PVg
We can see from that chart that it provides information about people and their reviews on Ashdown museum before and after its renovation. It is generally true to say that number of satisfied people have increased and dissatisfied have decreased. Looking at the information we can say that percentage of very satisfied visitors have gone up by 20 percent and very dissatisfied have dropped by 5 percent. A striking point to note is that there are numerous positive reviews as dissatisfied people have shown a drop by 25 percent. No response is steady. Looking at the over all perspective it is clear that the modifications that were done had a beneficial impact on crowd that came to see the museum. There was a rise of 22, 000 in number of members who saw the museum after renovation. Hence, we can conclude that the team who worked on the museum did a great job. The data that is collected is throwing light on the fact that there are many beautiful changes in the building.
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have shown a drop by 25 percent. No response is steady.

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after renovation.
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did a great job. The data that
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