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The line graph illustrates the population in three countries Columbia, Yamhill and Washington changed between 1940 and 2000.

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The line graph illustrates the population in three countries Columbia, Yamhill and Washington changed between 1940 and 2000. In 1940, Columbia had the lowest population between Washington and Yamhill. Overall, Washington has a far higher population. In 1940, the population of Columbia was around 28 thousand, the lowest in Oregon state. Yamhill has 30 thousand population while Washington has the highest population there is 75 thousand. By 1970, Washington's population increased nearly to 125 thousand, twice as much as Columbia and Yamhill together in this year. At this time, Yamhill’s population increased by 50% while the population for Columbia increased about 40% during the last three decades. Last, in 2000, the population of Columbia had approximately 75 thousands citizens, while Yamhill had 90 thousand citizens, there is an observable growth in 1940 and 1970. In this year, the Washington population gained 245 thousands, more than double than that of the 1970's.
The line graph illustrates the
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in three countries Columbia,
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Yamhill
and Washington
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between 1940 and 2000. In 1940, Columbia had the lowest
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between Washington and
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Yamhill
.
Overall
, Washington has a far higher population.

In 1940, the
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of Columbia was around 28 thousand, the lowest in Oregon state.
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Yamhill
has 30 thousand
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while Washington has the highest
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there is 75 thousand.

By 1970, Washington's
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increased
nearly
to 125 thousand, twice as much as Columbia and
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Yamhill
together in this year. At this time,
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Yamhill
’s
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increased by 50% while the
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for Columbia increased about 40% during the last three decades.

Last, in 2000, the
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of Columbia had approximately 75 thousands citizens, while
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Yamhill
had 90 thousand citizens, there is an observable growth in 1940 and 1970. In this year, the Washington
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gained 245 thousands, more than double than that of the
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1970's
.
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