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The given bar chart illustrates the migration from five nations (UK, New Zealand, India, Vietnam, and Italy) to Australia in 1962, 1982, and 2002.

The given bar chart illustrates the migration from five nations (UK, New Zealand, India, Vietnam, and Italy) to Australia in 1962, 1982, and 2002. NwdeW
The given bar chart illustrates the migration from five nations (UK, New Zealand, India, Vietnam, and Italy) to Australia in 1962, 1982, and 2002. Overall, it is readily apparent that the UK, Indians, and Vietnamese had been moving increasingly to Australia in the period given, while both the countries of Italy and New Zealand witnessed a considerable downfall. Although the percentage of Italian' settlers dramatically went down, the most number in most the given years still belonged to them. In terms of Italy, which was the most significant number of immigrants in Australia, hitting a peak of 40% in 1962 and suddenly reducing in 1982 and 2002 (20% and 15% respectively). Similarly, the rate of people coming from New Zealand experienced a slight decrease from above 5% to under 5%. On the other hand, Vietnamese became the section that had the highest percentage with 25% in 1982 compared to the other countries. Nearly the same as Vietnam, the UK had the same increasing trend from under 8% in 1962 to around 17% in 1982. India, the country that made a remarkable increase, starting at below 3% in 1982 and overshooting the percentage by 15%, eventually being just lower than Italy in 2002 with approximate 1%.
The
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bar chart illustrates the migration from five nations (UK, New Zealand, India, Vietnam, and Italy) to Australia in 1962, 1982, and 2002.

Overall
, it is
readily
apparent that the UK, Indians, and Vietnamese had been moving
increasingly
to Australia in the period
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
, while both the countries of Italy and New Zealand witnessed a considerable downfall. Although the percentage of Italian' settlers
dramatically
went down, the most number in most the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
years
still
belonged to them.

In terms of Italy, which was the most significant number of immigrants in Australia, hitting a peak of 40% in 1962 and
suddenly
reducing in 1982 and 2002 (20% and 15%
respectively
).
Similarly
, the rate of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
coming from New Zealand experienced a slight decrease from above 5% to under 5%.

On the other hand
, Vietnamese became the section that had the highest percentage with 25% in 1982 compared to the other countries.
Nearly
the same as Vietnam, the UK had the same increasing trend from under 8% in 1962 to around 17% in 1982. India, the country that made a remarkable increase, starting at below 3% in 1982 and overshooting the percentage by 15%,
eventually
being
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just
lower than Italy in 2002 with approximate 1%.
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