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The line graph illustrates the number of people who moved from rural to urban in three different countries over the period 2000 to 2025, including future predictions.

The line graph illustrates the number of people who moved from rural to urban in three different countries over the period 2000 to 2025, including future predictions. E7RmQ
The line graph illustrates the number of people who moved from rural to urban in three different countries over the period 2000 to 2025, including future predictions. Overall, it is clear that the trend of movement in all three countries is seen upwards and will continue to soar in the future except for Iran which is foreseen to remain steady. In 2000, Russia was the highest in urban migration around 15 million, whereas almost 8 million in Iran. Over the next ten years, these numbers had drastic changes and ultimately met in 2020, when the trend of Russia and Iran account for 80 million. These trends are predicted to continue, reaching 85 and 95 million in 2025 respectively. In contrast, Indonesia started with the second migrants of around 10 million. The statistics experienced a steady rise in the period from 2000 to 2020. It is expected to leave off in the coming years and peak at 30 million.
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that the trend of movement in all three countries is
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upwards and will continue to soar in the future
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Iran which is foreseen to remain steady.

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million
, whereas almost 8
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in Iran. Over the
next
ten years, these numbers had drastic
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changes
and
ultimately
met in 2020, when the trend of Russia and Iran account for 80
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. These trends
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in 2025
respectively
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In contrast
, Indonesia
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with the second migrants of around 10
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. The statistics experienced a steady rise in the period from 2000 to 2020. It is
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates the number of people who moved from rural to urban in three different countries over the period 2000 to 2025, including future predictions.

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