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The pie chart provides information on estimations of six various sectors globally between the period 2040 to 2060. Overall, Services sector is going to be a prime sector in both the future years given while manufacturing is not far behind than the former one. On the other hand, remaining areas of production seems to move at a steady rate. As it can clearly be seen in chart, almost three quarters will be equipped with only two areas which are services and manufacturing where former is expected to have 40% of share in 2040 which will then gradually increase till 41% and latter will start at 31% in 2040 and will go on to increase till 33%. While enough of the market is already equipped by 2 main sectors remining four areas make up for the remaining 30% approximately. Even though info-com tech will show a great dominance in 2040 with 15% it is only estimated to reach by 1% in next 20 years. An area to look out for is going to be agriculture since it will decrease from 4% in 2040 to 1% in 2060 on the contrary Materials would just be increasing by a percent. Last but not the least energy is going to acquire 7% in 2040 of which will then fall by 2% in 2060.

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sectors
 globally between the period 2040 to 2060.

Overall
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sector
 is going to be a prime You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregionpartdistrictzone
sector
 in both the future years This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 while manufacturing is not far Use "(behind)" to make a comparison with this adjective.(behind)
behind
 than the former one. On the other hand
, remaining You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 of production seems to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 at a steady rate.

As it can clearly
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seen
 in chart, almost three quarters will be equipped
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only
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areas
 which are services and manufacturing where former is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 to have 40% of share in 2040 which will then gradually
 increase till 41% and latter will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 at 31% in 2040 and will go on to increase till 33%.

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enough
 of the market is already equipped by 2 main You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregionpartdistrictzone
sectors
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remining
 four You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 up for the remaining 30% approximately. “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Even though
 info-com tech will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 a great dominance in 2040 with 15% it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 estimated to reach by 1% in next
 20 years. An You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 to look out for is going to be agriculture since it will decrease from 4% in 2040 to 1% in 2060 on the contrary
 Materials would This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 be increasing by a percent. Last This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not the least energy is going to acquire 7% in 2040 of which will then fall by 2% in 2060. 