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The line graph illustrates the information about the number of tourists who have visited the Caribbean island and stayed on cruise ships and an island. The figure is given in million from 2010 to 2017, described in the following paragraphs. Overall, it can be seen that the total number of visitors was rising through the period given. However, the number of visitors who chose the particular accommodations were varied. Initially, started from 2012, one million visitors travelled to a Caribbean island and the figure was gradually rose to approximately 2. 7 million in 2015, after that, stability has been observed in 2016. However, the number was dramatically increased to 3. 5 at the end of the period given. Moreover, the similarity was observed in the data of visitors who stayed on the cruise ships, begun with 0. 25 million in 2010 and went up to 0. 5 million in 2011. Although the quantity of visitors in 2012 marginally diminished to 2010’s figure, it was able to decrease continually between 2012 and 2017. Staying on the islands was the most constant information, the graph maintained the same level from 2010 to 2011. Following by a moderate rise to 1. 5 million and being the same level to 2015. The amount dropped moderately to 1. 25 million and ended with the same amount as the previous year.
The line graph illustrates the information about the
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number
of tourists who have visited the Caribbean
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island
and stayed on cruise ships and an
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island
. The figure is
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given
in
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million
from 2010 to 2017,
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described
in the following paragraphs.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the total
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number
of
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visitors
was rising through the period
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given
.
However
, the
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number
of
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visitors
who chose the particular accommodations
were varied
.

Initially
,
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started
from 2012, one
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million
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visitors
travelled to a Caribbean
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island
and the figure was
gradually
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rose
to approximately 2. 7
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million
in 2015, after that, stability has
been observed
in 2016.
However
, the
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number
was
dramatically
increased to 3. 5 at the
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end
of the period
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given
.
Moreover
, the similarity
was observed
in the data of
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visitors
who stayed on the cruise ships, begun with 0. 25
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million
in 2010 and went up to 0. 5
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million
in 2011. Although the quantity of
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visitors
in 2012
marginally
diminished to
Apostrophes aren't needed for decades: "2010s".
2010’s
figure, it was able to decrease
continually
between 2012 and 2017. Staying on the
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islands
was the most constant information, the graph maintained the same level from 2010 to 2011. Following by a moderate rise to 1. 5
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million
and being the same level to 2015. The amount dropped
moderately
to 1. 25
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million
and ended with the same amount as the previous year.
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3 paragraphs
225 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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