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The graphs below show the number of calls a company received at their Nigerian call center in connection with the various car models they produce.

The graphs below show the number of calls a company received at their Nigerian call center in connection with the various car models they produce. RV1xk
The charts illustrate how many phone calls a car manufacturer’s Nigerian call center took, according to which car model was discussed. Overall, the number of calls for every model, except model C, decreased between 2010 and 2015. The number of calls taken concerning the Model C car was the only figure that increased between 2010 and 2015 with 71 and 84 respectively. Model A, on the other hand, was responsible for 52 calls to the Nigerian call center in 2010, and this total decreased to 49 in 2015. Meanwhile, the number of callers discussing Model B went from 33 down to 24, meaning that it had the lowest figure in both years. Of all the cars manufactured by this company, Model D, despite seeing a decline from 94 to 88 calls, was the most discussed car model during both 2010 and 2015. Model E also had a fall in the number of calls it was associated with, dropping from 68 in 2010 to 57.
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IELTS academic The graphs below show the number of calls a company received at their Nigerian call center in connection with the various car models they produce.

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