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Comparison between the maps

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The maps of the parks illustrate the noteworthy advancements that took at the Milton Park over 6 year time period from 2010 to 2016 Overall, the park had been developed by leaps and bounds. The infrastructure and recreational means had been built such as a playground, mini golf area, ice cream shop, toy shop and a picnic area. A new path had been constructed towards east side of the map. The pond had transformed to the substantial boating lake. There is still a cafe which was also present in 2010. There is also a toy shop constructed above the boating lake. An adventure area is also constructed near the woods. A lot man made environment has been constructed in this park as compared to the 2010. Although a lot of recreational means had been built, the natural habitat is almost not present in the park in 2016, a lot of trees and woods had been cut down. There are no fields present in the map of 2016, which had been present in 2010.

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constructed
 towards east side of the map. The pond had transformed to the substantial boating lake. There is still
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cafe
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present
 in 2010.

There is also
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constructed
 above the boating lake. An adventure area is also
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constructed
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park
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