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The line graph illustrates the four various methods of transport (road, water, rail, and pipeline) in the UK, from 1974 to 2002.

The line graph illustrates the four various methods of transport (road, water, rail, and pipeline) in the UK, from 1974 to 2002. xxJxb
Overall, the goods transport mode on the road showed steady growth, and considerable rise through the water transport, while the percentage of the rail transport showed fluctuation, and as well as, the pipeline gently increased. From 1974 and 1977 the water transport rate was nearly 35% and respectively 70% were used by road mode. The road mode dramatically improve by 95% in 1998, it continues gradually until 97% from 1998 to 2002 and meanwhile, water transport sightly grew between 57% to 59% in 1980 to 1995 from that year it was steadily maintained the same percentage since 1992. From 1992 to 1999 marginally fall as 55%, at same year rapidly increased 63% in 2002. The rail has randomly changed the fluctuation of growing in the UK from 1974 to 2002. , however, in 1995 to 2002 it's modestly increased as a 41%. A steady rate of rail moved at 40% from 1974 to 1978, meantime, the percentage of the pipeline between that year, 5% to 7% grew slightly, both mode line graphs were different variants between 1974 and 2002. Pipeline surge was modestly kept raised in 1995.
Overall
, the
goods
transport
mode
on the road
showed
steady growth, and considerable rise through the water
transport
, while the percentage of the rail
transport
showed
fluctuation, and
as well
as, the pipeline
gently
increased.

From 1974 and 1977
the water
transport
rate was
nearly
35% and
respectively
70% were
used
by road
mode
. The road
mode
dramatically
improve
by 95% in 1998, it continues
gradually
until 97% from 1998 to 2002 and meanwhile, water
transport
sightly
grew between 57% to 59% in 1980 to 1995 from that year it was
steadily
maintained the same percentage since 1992. From 1992 to 1999
marginally
fall as 55%, at same year
rapidly
increased 63% in 2002.

The rail has
randomly
changed
the fluctuation of growing in the UK from 1974 to 2002.
,
however
, in 1995 to 2002 it's
modestly
increased as a 41%. A steady rate of rail
moved
at 40% from 1974 to 1978, meantime, the percentage of the pipeline between that year, 5% to 7% grew
slightly
, both
mode
line graphs were
different
variants between 1974 and 2002. Pipeline surge was
modestly
kept
raised in 1995.
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates the four various methods of transport (road, water, rail, and pipeline) in the UK, from 1974 to 2002.

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