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The line graph illustrates the average cost that American customers spend on mobile and residential phone service annually between 2001to 2010.

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The line graph illustrates the average cost that American customers spend on mobile and residential phone service annually between 2001to 2010. Overall, it can be seen from line graph that, cell phone services spending on sharply increased while expenditures and residential phone services declined dramatically, both of services met on the same point in 2006 According to the line graph, In 2001, spending on mobile phone services began by $200 while the annual expenditures on the residential phone services were about $700 during the 5 years expenditure on residential phone dropped below $600 whereas, expenditure on cell phones rose over $500. In 2006, cell phones were overtaking residential phones and grew to $600 in 2007 then went steeply to $650 in 2008 thereafter, rose to approximately $750 in 2010. Meanwhile residential phones sow a graduall drop in 2007 and continued moderate decrease to 2010. Wordcound-152
The line graph illustrates the average cost that American customers spend on mobile and
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residential
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phone
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service
annually
between 2001to 2010.

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phone
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spending on
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expenditures
and
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residential
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phone
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services
declined
dramatically
, both of
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met on the same point in 2006

According to the line graph, In 2001, spending on mobile
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phone
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services
began by $200 while the annual
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on the
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residential
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phone
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were about $700 during the 5 years
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expenditure
on
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residential
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phone
dropped below $600 whereas,
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expenditure
on cell
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phones
rose over $500. In 2006, cell
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phones
were overtaking
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residential
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phones
and grew to $600 in 2007 then went
steeply
to $650 in 2008 thereafter, rose to approximately $750 in 2010.
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drop in 2007 and continued moderate decrease to 2010.

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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates the average cost that American customers spend on mobile and residential phone service annually between 2001to 2010.

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