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the production of cacao beans in six regions between 1992 and 1998

the production of cacao beans in six regions between 1992 and 1998 9yPn

The provided table graph gives information about the numbers of cacao which were produced in six areas during a 6-year period, starting from 1992. Overall, it is obvious that Asia and South Africa were the biggest producers of cacao beans during the given period, and both regions experienced a significant increase in production. In 1992, there were 46000 tons of cacao beans which were produced by North and Central America. This figure declined significantly before increasing 39000 tons and recovering its original points in 1998. Cacao production in England was almost doubled compared to Africa, at 56000 tons and 29000 tons respectively, but both these regions decreased slightly at the end of the given period. The numbers of cacao beans in Asia saw a dramatic increase to 436000 tons and made this region become the largest cacao production area. Meanwhile, in South Africa, cacao production decreased slightly to 12700 tons before increasing 389000 in 1998. In addition, the proportion of cacao beans in Oceania was almost doubled, at 76890 tons.

The provided table graph gives information about the numbers of cacao which were produced
 in six areas during a 6-year period, starting from 1992.

Overall
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beans
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given
 period, and both regions experienced a significant increase in production.

In 1992, there were 46000 tons of cacao You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
 which were produced
 by North and Central America. This figure declined significantly
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before
 increasing 39000 tons and recovering its original points in 1998. Cacao production in England was almost doubled compared to Africa, at 56000 tons and 29000 tons respectively
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but
 both these regions decreased slightly
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 period.

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beans
 in Asia This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
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 a dramatic increase to 436000 tons and made this region become the largest cacao production area. Meanwhile, in South Africa, cacao production decreased slightly
 to 12700 tons This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 increasing 389000 in 1998. In addition
, the proportion of cacao You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
 in Oceania was almost doubled, at 76890 tons. 