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The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the uk in 1980 and 2010

The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the uk in 1980 and 2010 ejyW
The graph illustrates the proportion of seasonal workers in the countries (England, Northern Ireland, Scotland, and Wales) of the United Kingdom between year 1980 and 2010. The calculations are measured in the percentage. Overall, the highest rise of part-time workers are observed for Scotland which is around 20% in 2010 as compare to around 11% in the year 1980. Where as, Nirthern Ireland had shown a drop in the same by about 4% as it is around 12% in 2010 as compare to about 15% in 1980. In terms of percentage, Wales is the only country that contribute around 35% of the part-time workers in 2010 which is eventually a spike of around 3% from the year 1980. Where as, the second highest percentage of part-time workers was contributed from England which is around 32% in 2010 and shows a rise of about 2% from about 30% in 1980. The other two countries that is Northern Ireland and Scotland had a little contribution in providing pqrt-time labourforce as compare to England and Wales. On the one hand, Northern Ireland is struggling at about 11% in 2010 with slight decrease of around 4% from 1980 which was 15%. On the other hand, Scotland had shown some improvement as their contribution is about 20% in 2010 with the rise of around 10% from 1980.
The graph illustrates the proportion of seasonal
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workers
in the countries (England, Northern Ireland, Scotland, and Wales) of the United Kingdom between year 1980 and 2010. The calculations
are measured
in the percentage.

Overall
, the highest rise of part-time
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workers
are observed
for Scotland which is
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around
20% in 2010 as compare to
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around
11% in the year 1980.
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,
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Ireland had shown a drop in the same by about 4% as it is
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around
12% in 2010 as compare to about 15% in 1980.

In terms of percentage, Wales is the
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country that contribute
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35% of the part-time
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workers
in 2010 which is
eventually
a spike of
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around
3% from the year 1980.
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Where as
, the second highest percentage of part-time
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workers
was contributed
from England which is
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around
32% in 2010 and
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a rise of about 2% from about 30% in 1980.

The other two countries
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Northern Ireland and Scotland had a
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contribution in providing
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labourforce
as compare to England and Wales. On the one hand, Northern Ireland is struggling at about 11% in 2010 with slight decrease of
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around
4% from 1980 which was 15%.
On the other hand
, Scotland had shown
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improvement as their contribution is about 20% in 2010 with the rise of
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around
10% from 1980.
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