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Percentage of british people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010

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The chart shows percentage of british people contributing to charity by age group for the year of 1990 and 2010. For 1990, the number of the people contributing in the charity increses with age till the age of 50 after which it declines. But, for 2000 - the number of the people contributing in charits increases with age till the age of 65 after which it declines. In 1990, majority of people contributing in charity were aged between 36 to 50 years, while in 2000 most of the contributers were in age group of 51 to 65 years. The number of contributors have decreased for ages between 18 and 50 from 1990 to 2000, while number has increased from 1990 to 2000 for the people having age more than 51.
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of 65 after which it declines. In 1990,
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group of 51 to 65 years. The
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IELTS academic Percentage of british people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010

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