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The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. OQeG
The column chart illustrate three different call category local, national and international and mobiles call uses in minutes for total eight years of period in UK. Overall, it is clear that Local call on fixed line is the highest uses stream for throughout eight years of period. However, Mobile phone is the least favorite segment and it is continuously increased in total period. Similarly, national and international call also shown increment throughout the period. As per the chart, in 1995, Local call at just over 70 billions minutes, which is significantly increased and touch high at 90 billions minute in the year 1999. After that this figure continuously decreased and at last remain similar as beginning. National and international calls started around 38 billion minutes in the year 1995, which is steadily rise and touch at 60 billions in the both year 2001 and 2002 as remain same. On other hand, least amount of mobile call was around 3 billions in 1995. then after dramatically increased throughout the total span and reached 45 billions in the year 2002.
The column chart illustrate three
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1999. After that this figure
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.

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