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The line graph illustrates the amount of people over 65 with influenza in a specific village in the UK between 1985 and 1995.

The line graph illustrates the amount of people over 65 with influenza in a specific village in the UK between 1985 and 1995. 7WpOn

The given line graph depicts the number of people from the age 64 and above who were ill by influenza in a particular village in the USA from 1985 to 1995. Overall, it can be clear from the chart that there were increases in the number of cases of elrerly people with flu over the period given. The most considerable proportion was made up in 1991 and the figure reached the peak, respectively. In 1985, the indicator of individuals with influenza stood at 40 and then rose gradually over the next three years by 15 people in 1987. The figure reveals a slight dip in the following year to just under 50 after which it increased sharply to reach a high of 75 in 1991. After 1991, there was a decline to about 60 in 1993 of the number of reported cases of flu. From this point, except for a minimal growth of about 5, the number stayed constant at about 60 at the end of the period.

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given
 line graph depicts the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 from the age 64 and above who were ill by influenza in a particular village in the USA from 1985 to 1995.

Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 from the chart that there were increases in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of cases of Possible spelling mistake found.elderly
elrerly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 with flu over the period This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
. The most considerable proportion was made
 up in 1991 and the figure reached the peak, respectively
.

In 1985, the indicator of individuals with influenza stood at 40 and then rose gradually
 over the next
 three years by 15 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in 1987. The figure reveals a slight dip in the following year to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 under 50 after which it increased sharply
 to reach a high of 75 in 1991.

After 1991, there was a decline to about 60 in 1993 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of reported cases of flu. From this point, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :with the exception of
except for
 a minimal growth of about 5, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 stayed constant at about 60 at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period. 