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rain water treatment after collecting

rain water treatment after collecting PMn5E
The diagram illustrates how an Australian town collects rainwater to convert it into drinking water after processing. Overall, the water is gathered for initial filtering and then Stored in storage. Before using as drinking water, they are treated with chemicals in water treatment tank. Initially the rainwater is collected from rooftops of many houses through pipes and drained into a water filter. Then the cleaned water is loaded into a storage tank. The water is transferred from Storage tank to water Treatment plant where the chemicals are added into it before being supplied as drinking water to the houses in the town.
The diagram illustrates how an Australian town collects rainwater to convert it into drinking
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after processing.

Overall
, the
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water
is gathered
for initial filtering and then Stored in storage.
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Before
using as drinking
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water
, they
are treated
with chemicals in
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water
treatment tank.

Initially
the rainwater
is collected
from rooftops of
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many
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houses
through pipes and drained into a
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water
filter.

Then the cleaned
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water
is loaded
into a storage tank.

The
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water
is transferred
from Storage tank to
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water
Treatment plant where the chemicals are
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added
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before
being supplied
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water
to the
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houses
in the town.

IELTS academic rain water treatment after collecting

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
102 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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