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The line graph illustrates the amount of paper, wood pulp, and sawn-wood produced in the UK over the period of 20 years.

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The line graph illustrates the amount of paper, wood pulp, and sawn-wood produced in the UK over the period of 20 years. Overall, the production of paper and packing saw a significant increase, standing at the highest position during the period shown. While the opposite pattern was true for the saw-wood and wood pulp produced. In 1980, the UK produced almost 250 million tonnes of paper and packing while the amount of wood pulp and sawn-wood manufactured was about 160 and 200 tonnes, respectively. Over the next ten years, the production of paper rose slightly to 250 tonnes. By contrast, the two remaining sectors dropped to the same point of 150 million tonnes. In the year 2000, the amount of paper and packing reached a peak of 350 million tonnes, while sawn-wood saw a gradual decline in production to just over 125 tonnes. The figure for wood pulp recovered and exceeded by roughly 30 million tonnes.
The line graph illustrates the amount of paper,
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pulp, and sawn-wood produced in the UK over the period of 20 years.

Overall
, the production of paper and packing
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a significant increase, standing at the highest position during the period shown. While the opposite pattern was true for the
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-wood and
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pulp produced.

In 1980, the UK produced almost 250
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million
tonnes of paper and packing while the amount of
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wood
pulp and sawn-wood manufactured was about 160 and 200 tonnes,
respectively
. Over the
next
ten years, the production of paper rose
slightly
to 250 tonnes. By contrast, the two remaining sectors dropped to the same point of 150
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million
tonnes.

In the year 2000, the amount of paper and packing reached a peak of 350
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tonnes, while sawn-wood
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saw
a gradual decline in production to
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over 125 tonnes. The figure for
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pulp recovered and exceeded by roughly 30
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tonnes.

IELTS academic The line graph illustrates the amount of paper, wood pulp, and sawn-wood produced in the UK over the period of 20 years.

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