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THE GIVEN CHART SHOW THE PERCENTAGE OF EXPENSES IN TWO COUNTRIES IN 2010.

THE GIVEN CHART SHOW THE PERCENTAGE OF EXPENSES IN TWO COUNTRIES IN 2010. j8BNM

THE PIE CHART ILLUSTRATES THE COMPARISON OF EXPENDITURE ON FIVE COMMODITIES (HOUSING, TRANSPORT, FOOD, HEALTH CARE AND OTHER GOODS) IN JAPAN AND MALAYSIA IN 2010. THE UNITS ARE MEASURED IN PERCENTILE. OVERALL, THE MEDIAN INDIVIDUALS OF JAPAN SPEND THE MOST ON OTHER GOOD WHEREAS, IN MALAYSIA PEOPLE SPEND THE HIGHEST AMOUNT ON HOUSING. HELATH CARE IS THE LEAST SPENT INDUSTRY IN BOTH NATIONS. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, THE PERCENT OF OTHER SERVICES IS ON PEAK WITH 29% IN JAPAN ON THE CONTRARY, AVERAGE JAPANESE SPEND THE HIGHEST ON HOUSING INDUSTRIES. FOOD IS ACCOUNTED FOR 24% AND 27% IN JAPAN AND MALAYSIA RESPECTIVELY. MASSES IN MALAYSIA SPENDS ON GOODS IS AROUND ONE FOURTH OF TOTAL. MOREOVER, THE SPENDING ON HOUSING BY JAPANESE CITIZENS IS MORE THAN ONE FIFTH OF TOTAL. THE PIE FURTHER COLLATE THAT, EXPENDITURE ON HEALTH IS THE LEAST SPENING COMMODITY AS COMPARED TO REST OF PRODUCT IN BOTH REGIONS WITH 6% AND 3% IN JAPAN AND MALAYSIA. AS FAR AS TRANSPORTATION IS CONCERNED IT IS STATED AS 20% IN JAPAN AND 10% IN MALAYSIA.

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