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The line graph illustrates that the amount of coffee sent abroad from Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica between 2002 and 2012. A glance at the graph reveals that all of the exports reached a higher capacity than in the begining.

The line graph illustrates that the amount of coffee sent abroad from Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica between 2002 and 2012. A glance at the graph reveals that all of the exports reached a higher capacity than in the begining. wBM8e
The line graph illustrates that the amount of coffee was sent abroad by Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica between 2002 and 2012. A glance at the graph reveals that all of the exports reached a higher capacity since the very beginning. In the 2002, the exported coffee in the Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica was respectively 15, nearly 13 and 5 million kilograms. Although the Brazil and Costa Rica rose their freight gradually to over 10 and 15million kilograms between 2002 and 2006, the Costa Rica lost trade volume that is reached roughly 7-8 million kilograms. The following 2008, the Costa Rica increased rapidly with a little fluctuate and reached to 20 million kilograms. Moreover the Brazil draw a fluctuate which were droped between 2008 and 2010, but finally there was reached the highest capacity of the trade which is 25 million kilograms in the 2012. In contrast, the export of Colombian coffee decreased by 2008, afterward, there was rose 15 million kilograms. In the essence, the consumption of the coffee was fluctuated down and up, but the all of them increased significantly.
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates that the amount of coffee sent abroad from Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica between 2002 and 2012. A glance at the graph reveals that all of the exports reached a higher capacity than in the begining.

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