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The line graph illustrated the percentage of car possession in the US distorted during 30 years ( from 1975 to 2005).

The line graph illustrated the percentage of car possession in the US distorted during 30 years ( from 1975 to 2005). j89pd
The line graph illustrated the percentage of car possession in the US distorted during 30 years ( from 1975 to 2005). The majority of Britains had got at least an automobile. Additionally, having two or three vehicles gradually came to be an upward tendency as opposed to the proletariat who owned no car. In 1975, nearly more than two-fifths of the UK possessed a car, then it declined moderately to 7% during a decade. The same trend was the number of people with no truck which took up a smaller percentage, especially 43%, followed by a significant decline, at a quarter. Moreover, the percentage of those who preserved 2 or 3 cars was approximately 7% and 4% respectively in 1975. Both of them increased across the next 10 years to around 14% and 5% on the other. Throughout two decades, half of the UK population had one rose back to 45%, whereas the human who's once the car maintained by the drop of 22%. On the other hand, there was a minimal boom of below 20% and nearly 10% in the figure for 2 or 3 cars ownership respectively.
The line graph illustrated the percentage of
car
possession in the US distorted during 30 years
(
from 1975 to 2005).

The majority of
Britains had
got
at least an automobile.
Additionally
, having two or three vehicles
gradually
came to be an upward tendency as opposed to the proletariat who
owned
no car.

In 1975,
nearly
more than two-fifths of the UK possessed a
car
, then it declined
moderately
to 7% during a decade. The same trend was the number of
people
with no truck which took up a smaller percentage,
especially
43%, followed by a significant decline, at a quarter.
Moreover
, the percentage of those who preserved 2 or 3
cars
was approximately 7% and 4%
respectively
in 1975. Both of them increased across the
next
10 years to around 14% and 5% on the other.

Throughout two decades, half of the UK population had one rose back to 45%, whereas the human
who's
once the
car
maintained by the drop of 22%.
On the other hand
, there was a minimal boom of below 20% and
nearly
10% in the figure for 2 or 3
cars
ownership
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrated the percentage of car possession in the US distorted during 30 years ( from 1975 to 2005).

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