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The line graph illustrate the dissimilarity of export of wheat in between 1985 to 1990 over Australia, canada and as well as in european society too.

The line graph illustrate the dissimilarity of export of wheat in between 1985 to 1990 over Australia, canada and as well as in european society too. jVe0y
The line graph illustrate the dissimilarity of export of wheat in between 1985 to 1990 over Australia, canada and as well as in european society too. And its unit is measure in million of tonnes. Overall we can see that the the transport of wheat from Astralia hit the bottom rock whearas the wheat sell overeas of European community reach the peak at last. At the initial point we can see that canada is at its peak at the starting point by transporting as much as wheat out of country almost 20 million of tonnes and touches its maximum in 1986 and swiftly decrease and reached nearly to 14 million of tonnes again slightly increase from 1989 to 1990 and hit the same amont like its initian point. Whear the Autalian masses sale 15 million of toones at first and reach at its top at 1986 and dramatically reduce and reach at around 11 million of tonnes at last. The european society sells almost 17 million tonns of wheat at its initial point and follow the downward tendency from1985 to 1986 and reached the nadir. Whearas the european people sells maximum amount of wheat in the final year and reached the vertx in 1990.
The line graph illustrate the dissimilarity of export of
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wheat
in
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between 1985 to 1990
over Australia,
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canada
and
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european
society too. And its unit is measure in
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million
of tonnes.

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we can
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that
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the the
transport of
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wheat
from
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Astralia
hit the bottom rock
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whearas
the
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wheat
sell
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overeas
of European community reach the peak at last.

At the initial
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point
we can
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see
that
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canada
is at its peak at the starting
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point
by transporting as much as
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wheat
out of country almost 20
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million
of tonnes and touches its maximum in 1986 and
swiftly
decrease and reached
nearly
to 14
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million
of tonnes again
slightly
increase from 1989 to 1990 and hit the same
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amont
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like
its
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initian
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point
.
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the
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Autalian
masses sale 15
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million
of
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toones
at
first
and reach at its top at 1986 and
dramatically
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and reach at around 11
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million
of tonnes at last.

The
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european
society sells almost 17
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million
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tonns
of
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wheat
at its initial
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point
and follow the downward tendency from1985 to 1986 and reached the nadir.
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the
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european
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sells
maximum amount of
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in the final year and reached the
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vertx
in 1990.
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrate the dissimilarity of export of wheat in between 1985 to 1990 over Australia, canada and as well as in european society too.

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