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The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007.

The line graph illustrates the consumption of Butter, Margarine, and Low fat & reduced spreads between 1981 to 2007 and is measured by grams. To begin with, butter stood at around 141 in 1981 then increased gradually to reach at approximately 159 in 1986. The following years saw a sharp fall until it drops completely to 50 in the last year. Margarine started at 90 and slightly fell to 80 in mid 80’s but it marginally rose and leveled out to 100 in the early 90’s before it plummeted to 40 in the final years. Interestingly, when low fat & reduced spreads were introduced in 1996, it reached a sudden peak of approximately 80 before it gradually falls to 70 in 2007, gaining the most popularity among the rest of the spreads. Overall, it is noticeable that while butter was the most favorite in the 80’s, it was replaced by margarine in the early 90’s and following the introduction of low fat and reduced spread in 1996, it was the most widely used spread during the final years.

The line graph illustrates the consumption of Butter, Margarine, and Low This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chubby
fat
 & This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
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spreads
After “between”, use “and”, not “to”.between 1981 and 2007
between 1981 to 2007
 and is measured
 by grams.

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begin
 with, butter stood at around 141 in 1981 then increased gradually
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 a sharp fall until it drops completely to 50 in the last year. Margarine This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
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90’s
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before
 it plummeted to 40 in the final years.

Interestingly
, when low This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chubby
fat
 & This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
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spreads
were introduced
 in 1996, it reached a sudden peak of approximately 80 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 it gradually
 falls to 70 in 2007, gaining the most popularity among the rest of the spreads.

Overall
, it is noticeable that while butter was the most favorite in the Apostrophes aren’t needed for decades: “80s”.80s
80’s
, it was replaced
 by margarine in the early Apostrophes aren’t needed for decades: “90s”.90s
90’s
 and following the introduction of low This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chubby
fat
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
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spread
 in 1996, it was the most widely
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used
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spread
 during the final years. 