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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart compares the populations of Yemen and Italy citizens in three age groups in the year 2000 and predicts the projections for 2050. Overall, Yemen had majority of proportions of younger populations in 2000 and the same is predicted for the year 2050. The populations in both countries are predicted to get older over the 50 year period. In 2000 just half of the Yemeni populations were below 14 years, compared to just 14% of Italians in the same age group. Only a small percentage of people in Yemen were above 60 at 3. 6%, in contrast to nearly a quarter of the Italian population. The largest age group for Italy was 15-59 years old with just over 60% while Yemen had 46. 3% of its population in the category. Yemen average age is set to increase with the proportion of over 60 increasing by just 2% and the middle group rising by 11%, leaving the younger group with a decrease of nearly 13%. it is envisaged that by 2050 the number of people in Italy over 60 will jump to 42. 3%, the percentage of those in youngest bracket will drop to 11. 5%, and the share in the middle category will decrease to 46. 2%

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