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The line graph gives the information about the changes in the number of coffee exports in three countries from 2002 to 2012

The line graph gives the information about the changes in the number of coffee exports in three countries from 2002 to 2012 LGmmV
The line graph gives the information about the changes in the number of coffee exports in three countries from 2002 to 2012 and is measured in millions of kilograms. Overall, it is important to note that there weresome fluctuations, but over the period as a whole, the amount of coffee exports increased in all three countries. There was a gradual rise in the production of coffee in Brazil and Costa Rica. They began at a similar rate of between5 and 12 million kilograms in 2002. During 2002 and 2006, while the coffee exported from Brazil increased steadily, the amount of coffee exports from Costa Rica dropped significantly under 10 million. However, they both increased dramaticallyand reached at a peak of 25 million in Brazil and 20 million in Costa Rica. Colombia had a more fluctuated figure of exports than Brazil and Costa Rica. First, it stood at 5 million in 2002 and steadily increased in four years. 2008 saw a sharp fall to about 2million. After that, the exports increased sharply of 15 millionat the end of the period.
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exports
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increased
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coffee
in Brazil and Costa Rica. They began at a similar rate of between5 and 12
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million
kilograms in 2002. During 2002 and 2006, while the
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coffee
exported from Brazil
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increased
steadily
, the amount of
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exports
from Costa Rica dropped
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million
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dramaticallyand
reached at a peak of 25
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million
in Brazil and 20
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million
in Costa Rica.

Colombia had a more fluctuated figure of
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exports
than Brazil and Costa Rica.
First
, it stood at 5
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in 2002 and
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in four years. 2008
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. After that, the
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increased
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IELTS academic The line graph gives the information about the changes in the number of coffee exports in three countries from 2002 to 2012

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