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The given graph shows data about the consumption of 3 spreads (margarine, low fat and reduced spreads)

The given graph shows data about the consumption of 3 spreads (margarine, low fat and reduced spreads) 0MqqG
The given graph shows data about the consumption of 3 spreads (margarine, low fat and reduced spreads and butter) from 1981 to 2007 with the unit of gram. Overall, the consumption of low fat and reduced spreads kept its drop above the consumption of margarine and butter in the final years. In 1981, the consumption of butter spread was at the top place with approximately 145 grams as the most widely used product, while for the margarine, it stood at the second place with nearly 90 grams. The butter spread decreased significantly until it overtook the consumption of margarine with over 40 grams in 2007. The consumption of margarine changed intermittently until 1991 and it remained steady with the amount of 100 grams for 5 years. It fell considerably towards 40 grams in 2007. Despite the consumption of butter and margarine started in the early years, the consumption of low fat and reduced spreads were only consumed at around 10 grams in 1996. However, it sharply jumped over 80 grams in 2001. Then, it slightly dipped into nearly 70 grams in 2007, but still placed at the top of the other two spreads.
The
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given
graph
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shows
data about the
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consumption
of 3
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spreads
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(margarine
, low
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fat
and
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reduced
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spreads
and
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butter)
from 1981 to 2007 with the unit of
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gram
.
Overall
, the
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consumption
of low
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fat
and
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reduced
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spreads
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kept
its drop above the
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consumption
of
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margarine
and
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butter
in the final years.

In 1981, the
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consumption
of
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butter
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spread
was at the top place with approximately 145
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grams
as the most
widely
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used
product, while for the
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margarine
, it stood at the second place with
nearly
90
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grams
. The
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butter
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spread
decreased
significantly
until it overtook the
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consumption
of
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margarine
with over 40
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grams
in 2007. The
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consumption
of
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margarine
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changed
intermittently
until 1991 and it remained steady with the amount of 100
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grams
for 5 years. It fell
considerably
towards 40
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grams
in 2007.

Despite the
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consumption
of
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butter
and
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margarine
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started
in the early years, the
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consumption
of low
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fat
and
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reduced
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spreads
were
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only
consumed at around 10
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grams
in 1996.
However
, it
sharply
jumped over 80
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grams
in 2001. Then, it
slightly
dipped into
nearly
70
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grams
in 2007,
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but
still
placed at the top of the other two
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spreads
.
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IELTS academic The given graph shows data about the consumption of 3 spreads (margarine, low fat and reduced spreads)

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