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The line graph gives information about the level of consumption of three spreads between 1981 and 2007.

The line graph gives information about the level of consumption of three spreads between 1981 and 2007. nEgWP
The line graph gives information about the level of consumption of three spreads between 1981 and 2007. Overall, downward trends in Margarine and butter consumption were seen in the given period of time, whereas, Low fat & reduced spreads had an upsurge starting from the year 1996. Butter was consumed highly at the beginning of the period then later the spread of Margarine took over Butter between 1991 and 2001. At the end of the years, low fat and reduced spreads were consumed highly. Regarding, the amount of butter consumed, it started rising with about 140 grams and touched the highest point at around 160 grams in 1986 but it collapsed to the lowest point at about 50 grams in the final year. In the same way, at the start of the year, Margarine reached at 90 grams of consumption level and went down to 80 grams in 1986; which then it fluctuated and declined to touch the lowest point of 40 grams in 2007. Nevertheless, the consumed amount of low fat & reduced spreads began with 10 grams in 1996. It hit the peak of around 80 grams in 2001 but there was a gradual slide between 2001 and 2007.
The line graph gives information about the level of consumption of three
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spreads
between 1981 and 2007.

Overall
, downward trends in Margarine and
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butter
consumption were
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seen
in the
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given
period of time, whereas, Low
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fat
&
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reduced
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spreads
had an upsurge starting from the
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year
1996.
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Butter
was
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consumed
highly
at the beginning of the period then later the
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spread
of Margarine took over
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Butter
between 1991 and 2001. At the
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end
of the years, low
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fat
and
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reduced
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spreads
were
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consumed
highly
.

Regarding, the amount of
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butter
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consumed
, it
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started
rising with about 140
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grams
and touched the highest point at around 160
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grams
in 1986
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but
it collapsed to the lowest point at about 50
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grams
in the final
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year
.
In the same way
, at the
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start
of the
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year
, Margarine reached at 90
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grams
of consumption level and went down to 80
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grams
in 1986; which then it fluctuated and declined to touch the lowest point of 40
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grams
in 2007.

Nevertheless
, the
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consumed
amount of low
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fat
&
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reduced
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spreads
began with 10
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grams
in 1996. It hit the peak of around 80
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grams
in 2001
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but
there was a gradual slide between 2001 and 2007.
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