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recycling
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Diastics
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of
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folish
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matemats
.
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comparsing
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Cans
and
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on look place
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dilning
1982 to 2010 l

Overall
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Pessportive
, it the
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can
be
clearly
of Plastic years when in
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Seen
that
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Preferabble
throughout the comparison to other Components.

AL the
first
glance it that the
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Slooted
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can
he observed
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recycling
OF
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Papex
and cardboard 10 1982 which
slightly
declined to in mid
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.
However
, it
further
Increased
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started
decreasing
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, it
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can
be
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elldent
that the
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relise
of grass contained's Increased from the year 1955 was From 40. 1 to during the beginning of 2010.

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mone
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abservation
, it
is illustrated
!
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that
the
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of
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aluminium
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Cans
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ni
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begon
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remarkably
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esclated
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which
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linegraph
more
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, it
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that Component remained less than 10%.
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the
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recycling
of Plastic identical
nearly
in all the years Hill 2010
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