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The maps illustrate information about the development from 1960 to till now. The data is given in years and names.

The maps illustrate information about the development from 1960 to till now. The data is given in years and names. GJ6Ow
The maps illustrate information about the development from 1960 to till now. The data is given in years and names. To initiate, in 1962, there was only a single road, which was going through the meadownside village and the railway track which was passes through in founton. However, in 1985, the residential area of Meadownside was extended and the road of the village was converted into the highway. In addition, there was no significant change in fountain area in 1985, but the new Highway was constructed which connects fonton and Meadownside. The new buildings were built in meadownside like leisure complex house estate and super store. However, nowadays, fonton and meadownside are totally joint with each other and hotel station, business park, another railway was constructed To sum up, in 1962, there were just two places, however, these days, there are lots of places with totally changed the design of this city.
The maps illustrate information about the development from 1960 to till
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now
. The data is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
in years and names.

To initiate, in 1962, there was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
a single road, which was going through the
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meadownside
village and the railway
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
track
which was passes through in
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founton
.
However
, in 1985, the residential area of
Possible spelling mistake found.
Meadownside
was extended
and the road of the village
was converted
into the highway.
In addition
, there was no significant
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
in fountain area in 1985,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
the new Highway
was constructed
which connects
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fonton
and
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Meadownside
. The new buildings
were built
in
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meadownside
like leisure complex
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house
estate and super store.

However
, nowadays,
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fonton
and
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meadownside
are
totally
joint with each other and hotel station, business park, another railway
was constructed


To sum up, in 1962, there were
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
two places,
however
, these days, there are lots of places with
totally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
the design of this city.
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