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The line graph given illustrates data on how many individuals had a vegetarian diet in UK adolescents in the period from 1980 to 2020.

The line graph given illustrates data on how many individuals had a vegetarian diet in UK adolescents in the period from 1980 to 2020. M3Jw9

The line graph given illustrates data on how many individuals had a vegetarian diet in UK adolescents in the period from 1980 to 2020. Starting from shy of 200 000, person having a vegetarian diet in UK witnessed a slight fluctuation of around 30 000 individuals until 1995. There was a gradual increase between 1995 and 2000, which was 2 times compared to the previous period. During following 15-year-period, this figure decreased steadily, and stopped at the same level of 1995. There was a dramatic rise between 2015 and 2020, it reached the peak of more than 900000 individuals. Overall, quantity of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet just gradually fluctuation during from 1980 to 2015. After 2015, the vegetarian diet newly spread, thus, reaching the highest point in 2020.

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Starting from shy of 200 000, person having a vegetarian diet in UK witnessed a slight fluctuation of around 30 000 individuals until 1995. There was a gradual increase between 1995 and 2000, which was 2 times compared to the previous period. During following 15-year-period, this figure decreased steadily
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IELTS academic The line graph given illustrates data on how many individuals had a vegetarian diet in UK adolescents in the period from 1980 to 2020.

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