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Cambridge IELTS 7, Test 2, Academic writing task 1

Cambridge IELTS 7, Test 2, Academic writing task 1 L3pM1

The graph gives information about the consumption of chicken, beef, lamb and fish in a particular European nation from 1979 to 2004. The data calibrated in gram. The beef and lamp consumption per person per week showed some fluctuations but dramatically decline over the period, while the grams per person per week the consumption of chicken in a European country experienced an upward trajectory. The consumption of fish saw a steady. In early 1979 the consumption per person per week of beef (220 grams) was the highest among these four food. However, it oscillated throughout the period, reaching a plateau at the beginning of 1984, then gradually dropped from considerably less than 250 grams to well over 100 grams between 1984 and 2004. Lamp consume per person per week showed some fluctuated widely throughout the period, but the general trend was downwards, and it ended in 2004 at around 70 grams. In 1979 the consumption of chicken dramatical increased throughout the period, exceeding lamp consume rate in little of after in 1979 and reaching almost 250 grams in the end of the period. The figure for the consumption of fish remained fairly stable, hovering at around nearly 50 grams per person per week, but the consumption of fish was the lowest in the end of the period.

The graph gives information about the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexpenditureutilizationdrinking
consumption
 of chicken, beef, lamb and fish in a particular European nation from 1979 to 2004. The data calibrated in gram.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 beef and lamp You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexpenditureutilizationdrinking
consumption
 per You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbodylifewomansomebodycharacter
person
 per You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
week
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 fluctuations This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
dramatically
 decline over the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermspanstretchseasonagecourse
period
, while the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatriarchancestorgrannygrandma
grams
 per You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbodylifewomansomebodycharacter
person
 per You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
week
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexpenditureutilizationdrinking
consumption
 of chicken in a European country experienced an upward trajectory. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexpenditureutilizationdrinking
consumption
 of fish This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a steady.

In early 1979 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexpenditureutilizationdrinking
consumption
 per You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbodylifewomansomebodycharacter
person
 per You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
week
 of beef (220 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatriarchancestorgrannygrandma
grams)
 was the highest among these four food. However
, it oscillated throughout the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermspanstretchseasonagecourse
period
, reaching a plateau at the beginning of 1984, then gradually
 dropped from considerably
 less than 250 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatriarchancestorgrannygrandma
grams
 to well over 100 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatriarchancestorgrannygrandma
grams
 between 1984 and 2004. Lamp consume per You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbodylifewomansomebodycharacter
person
 per You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
week
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 fluctuated widely
 throughout the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermspanstretchseasonagecourse
period
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the general trend was downwards, and it ended in 2004 at around 70 grams.

In 1979 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexpenditureutilizationdrinking
consumption
 of chicken Possible spelling mistake found.dramaticdramaticallygrammaticaldramaticspragmatical
dramatical
 increased throughout the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermspanstretchseasonagecourse
period
, exceeding lamp consume rate in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 of after in 1979 and reaching almost 250 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatriarchancestorgrannygrandma
grams
 in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermspanstretchseasonagecourse
period
. The figure for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexpenditureutilizationdrinking
consumption
 of fish remained fairly
 stable, hovering at around nearly
 50 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatriarchancestorgrannygrandma
grams
 per You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbodylifewomansomebodycharacter
person
 per You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
week
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexpenditureutilizationdrinking
consumption
 of fish was the lowest in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermspanstretchseasonagecourse
period
. 