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The diagram process of water circulation

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The diagram process depict water circulation, which is the nonstop water movement on, above and below the top of the land. Overall, there are 4 primary steps. They are sun heating, ocean water evaporation, condensation, and cloud formation. As a matter of fact, the ocean supplies a very large proportion to produce water vapors. First of all, the sun warms the ocean water. Then, the sea water evaporates and rises into the air. The third process is the water vapour condenses to form clouds. The next process, if it is enough, water condenses to drop and becomes heavy enough to fall as snow and rain onto lakes and the grounds; water is respired by the plants for growing. After this, water from the rain is absorbed into the soil; the rest of the water flows through the low lands. Finally the water returns to the ocean and the steps repeat themselves.

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 movement on, above and below the top of the land.

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First of all
, the sun warms the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtidepondpuddlesea
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. Then, the sea You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
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 evaporates and rises into the air. The third process is the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
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vapour
 condenses to form clouds. The next
 process, if it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
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water
 condenses to drop and becomes heavy This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 to fall as snow and rain onto lakes and the grounds; You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is respired
 by the plants for growing. After this, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 from the rain is absorbed
 into the soil; the rest of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 flows through the low lands. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Finally,
Finally
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 returns to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtidepondpuddlesea
ocean
 and the steps repeat themselves. 