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The line graph eliminates the variations of criminal activities which took place in three various destinations of Newport city centre between 2003 and 2012 Overall, it is clear from the line graph that burglary trend is decreasing, while there was a rise in car theft.

The line graph eliminates the variations of criminal activities which took place in three various destinations of Newport city centre between 2003 and 2012 Overall, it is clear from the line graph that burglary trend is decreasing, while there was a rise in car theft. However, robbery trend was in continuous To commence with burglary, the burglary incidents were approximately 3400 which were increases up to 3800 in 2004 and after 3 years this was plunged by 1600 incidents were about 2800 in 2003 and which were similar in 2005 and in 2006 these were fell by 800 and then surged by up to 150 in 2007, whereas robbery incidents were 600 from 2003 to 2007 From 2007 to 2012, incidents of burglary were 1400 which were decline by approximately 500 in 2008 and then incline by 400 in 2009 and then there were large changes seen in incidents but in last the incidents were 1400 in 2012. There were variations in the trend of car theft

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