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The pie chart illustrate the different ways of handling of dangerous waste produce in Sweden, the United Kingdom(UK) and the Republic of Korea. Overall, five various methods have been used in the three countries including incineration, underground disposal, chemical treatment, recycling and dumping at sea. The UK has four ways in different percentages, while the other two nations have only used three methods. Furthermore, incineration is the commonest method used by Swedish and UK governments. Firstly, 82% of dangerous waste in the UK has been buried underground, while 16% of garbage produce undergoes chemical treatment and dumping at sea equally. However, only 2% has been incinerated and none has undergone recycling. Although, the majority of garbage (55%) is buried underground similar to the UK, a significant percentage (20%) is incinerated in Sweden. Lastly, the republic of Korea recycles the majority (69%) of dangerous waste, while 22% is buried underground and only 9% is incinerated.
The pie chart illustrate the
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ways of handling of
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waste produce in Sweden, the United Kingdom(UK) and the Republic of Korea.

Overall
, five various methods have been
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used
in the three countries including incineration,
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underground
disposal, chemical treatment, recycling and dumping at sea. The UK has four ways in
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different
percentages, while the other two nations have
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three methods.
Furthermore
, incineration is the commonest method
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used
by Swedish and UK
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governments
.

Firstly
, 82% of
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dangerous
waste in the UK has
been buried
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underground
, while 16% of garbage produce undergoes chemical treatment and dumping at sea
equally
.
However
,
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only
2% has
been incinerated
and none has undergone recycling. Although, the majority of garbage (55%)
is buried
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underground
similar to the UK, a significant percentage (20%)
is incinerated
in Sweden.

Lastly
, the republic of Korea recycles the majority (69%) of
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dangerous
waste, while 22%
is buried
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underground
and
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only
9%
is incinerated
.
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