Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The graph illustrates the weekly food consumption of a person in a European country in three years 1992, 2002 and 2012.

The graph illustrates the weekly food consumption of a person in a European country in three years 1992, 2002 and 2012. RVMkY
The graph illustrates the weekly food consumption of a person in a European country in three years 1992, 2002 and 2012. As can be seen from the graph, while there was a downward trend in the consumption of meat, the opposite was true for the other types of food. In addition, vegetables made up the highest part of people’s diets, whereas cheese was the lowest consumed product. In 1992, 2140 grams of vegetables were used weekly in people’s diets, which was higher than the consumption of meat with 1148 grams. The amount of vegetables increased slightly to 2220 in 2012. By contrast, there was a small growth in the amount of meat at 1211 in 2002, before declining by 79 grams over the next ten years. People consumed 837 grams of wheat and 532 grams of beans per week, then both figures grew to 977 grams and 590 grams respectively for the following twenty years. Meanwhile, cheese accounted for 113 grams in people’s food intake. After climbing to 125 grams in 2002. the amount of cheese maintained unchanged until 2012.
The graph illustrates the weekly food consumption of a person in a European country in three years 1992, 2002 and 2012.

As can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
from the graph, while there was a downward trend in the consumption of meat, the opposite was true for the other types of food.
In addition
, vegetables made up the highest part of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
’s diets, whereas cheese was the lowest consumed product.

In 1992, 2140
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
grams
of vegetables were
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
weekly in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
’s diets, which was higher than the consumption of meat with 1148
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
grams
. The amount of vegetables increased
slightly
to 2220 in 2012. By contrast, there was a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
growth in the amount of meat at 1211 in 2002,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
declining by 79
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
grams
over the
next
ten years.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
People
consumed 837
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
grams
of wheat and 532
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
grams
of beans per week, then both figures grew to 977
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
grams
and 590
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
grams
respectively
for the following twenty years. Meanwhile, cheese accounted for 113
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
grams
in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
’s food intake.
“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
climbing to 125
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
grams
in 2002.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
the
amount of cheese maintained unchanged until 2012.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The graph illustrates the weekly food consumption of a person in a European country in three years 1992, 2002 and 2012.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • The graph illustrates the weekly food consumption of a person in a European country in three years 1992, 2002 and 2012.