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housing for young people during 1990s and 2010s

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The pie charts and the table describe about what the young people almost 25 Years old for housing and the availability of kind of housing In London during the 1990s and the 2010s and Every people chose the different types for housing. The housing used with others for living has incresed over the last 10 years. Most of young people in the 1990s was live with their parents and decresed in the 2010s. also in 1990s the young people who live in their own flat was lower than the 2010s. the housing for living alone was decresed during 1990s and 2010s because the available unit was decresed too. The highest young people used housing together was in 2010s because there was 48, 500 available units. However the lowest that people used in the 2010s was flats because there only 10. 000 available units.
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for housing and the availability of kind of housing In London during the 1990s and the 2010s and

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in the 1990s was
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flat was lower than the 2010s.
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during 1990s
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the available unit was
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The highest
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housing together was
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in 2010s
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there was 48, 500 available units.
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in the 2010s was flats
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IELTS academic housing for young people during 1990s and 2010s

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3 paragraphs
143 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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