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the diagram show the process of produced chocolate

the diagram show the process of produced chocolate MyYmk

A glance at the given illustrates the process of producing chocolate. Overall, this process has around ten stages, beginning with growing cacao trees in America, Africa, Indonesia and finishing with produce. At the first stage, cacao trees have been grown in America, Africa and Indonesia. on ripping red pods, will be harvested by the farmer then we have white cocoa beans. Turn to the next stage of the process, all the beans are fermented and then spread in the sun to dry and then put in large sacks. After that, this will be transported by train or lorry to the factory. To continue the process which is called “ clean stage “. It means that all the beans are roasted at high temperature and crushed, and all the outer shells are removed by the machine. Move to the last stage, the inner part pressed and then we have the liquid of chocolate produced.

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process
 of producing chocolate.

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process
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stages
, beginning with growing cacao trees in America, Africa, Indonesia and finishing with produce.

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stage
, cacao trees have been grown
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on
 ripping red pods, will be harvested
 by the farmer then we have white cocoa beans.

Turn to the next
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stage
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
, all the beans are fermented
 and then spread in the sun to dry and then put in large sacks. After that, this will be transported
 by train or lorry to the factory.

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process
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“ 
clean You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
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 “. It means that all the beans are roasted
 at high temperature and crushed, and all the outer shells are removed
 by the machine.

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 to the last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
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