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The table below shows the amount of people that watch sports in four countries: Australia, the United Kingdom, United States of America and Canada

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The table below shows the amount of people that watch sports in four countries: Australia, the United Kingdom, United States of America and Canada. It is clear that Americans watch the most sports in the three remaining nations. And it is also evident that the sport has the most views of all sports is tennis. America has the highest number of the view, that is 25, 2 million views. It is nearly twice as much as Canada( 14, 5). The sport that is the most cared by Americans is Golf with 11, 2 million views with one- second of all the remaining sports. About tennis, it has 25, 9 million views- the highest number. It is nearly twice as much as Motor racing( 12, 7). And, America citizens also watch the most tennis in the three remaining nations. With 6, 1 million views, Canada citizens are the least of watching tennis.
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, Canada citizens are the least of watching tennis.
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