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The line graph describes the information about international tourist arrivals in 5 countries

The line graph describes the information about international tourist arrivals in 5 countries 969Qw

The given line graph describes the information about global visitor arrivals in the USA, France, Malaysia, Egypt and Brazil over a fifteen-year period, commencing from 1995. Overall, the number of tourists to these five countries has increased from 1995 to 2010. Another striking feature is that the USA and France are the two countries with a record figure of tourists visiting. Initially, in 1995, the number of visitors to the US took the lead in five countries with 70 million people while the number in France was second. The year 2000 saw a sharp rise in the number of international tourist arrivals in France from 30 million to 60 million, which was approximately 25 million less than that of The USA. Then in 2000, the number of international visitors to the US peaked at more than 90 million people however, in 2010, that of the US tended to decrease while that of France increased. Between 1995 and 2000, the number of international visitors to Malaysia, Egypt, and Brazil was much lower than in the other two countries. In 1995, about 10 million people chose Brazil or Egypt as their travel destination and this number nearly doubled 15 years later. Meanwhile, the number of international tourists to Malaysia was 20 million in 1995, which was equal to the total number of visitors to Egypt and Brazil in the same year combined, then gradually increased to 50 million in 2010.

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