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The line graph describes the data on the number of passengers in different timetables using the metro station in Paris.

The line graph describes the data on the number of passengers in different timetables using the metro station in Paris. aqADY
The line graph describes the data on the number of passengers in different timetables using the metro station in Paris. Overall, there is a significant difference in this graph where a tremendous fluctuation can be seen during this whole period. The number of passengers reaches its peak twice a day that is 400 people. One is in the morning where people go to their work between 8: 00 and 8: 30. The other time is between 18: 00 and 18: 30 in which most people return from work. In the morning around 6: 00, the metro reaches its lowest number of passengers in which number is only 100. Similarly, there’s a drop in the number at 16: 30 and 20: 30. Throughout the day, the number of passengers uses the metro is tenuous. After 8 in the morning, there’s a sharp drop where it reaches 200, then it rises again at 10: 00 until it reaches 300 people at 12: 30. The number remains the same for around three hours, then it faces another drop. Later at 18: 00, a noticeable increase after the huge decline to 100 to become twofold is followed by another drop at 22: 00. To conclude, the highest number of passengers of London underground stations can be found in the stations during the office going and office leaving times in a day.
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go to their work between 8: 00 and 8: 30. The other time is between 18: 00 and 18: 30 in which most
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return from work. In the morning around 6: 00, the metro
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at 16: 30 and 20: 30.

Throughout the day, the
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the metro is tenuous. After 8 in the morning, there’s a sharp drop where it
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200, then it rises again at 10: 00 until it
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300
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remains the same for around three hours, then it faces another drop. Later at 18: 00, a noticeable increase after the huge decline to 100 to become twofold
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of London underground stations can
be found
in the stations during the office going and office leaving times in a day.
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IELTS academic The line graph describes the data on the number of passengers in different timetables using the metro station in Paris.

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