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The line graph describes sales and expenses of a psrticular company. Summerize the details.

The line graph describes sales and expenses of a psrticular company. Summerize the details. 8xVAw

The provided line chart describes figures of sales and expenses. The info is given in millions of $ and indicates a spin of time which equils to a year. Overall, the ratio of sales ascended experiencing a dramatic change and some fluctuations, while expenses overcame a gradual decrease. The rate of sales started at 3 million $ which increased dramatically two times, that's to say 6 million $ in the following year. It experienced some fluctuations during the time from February to June. Then descended to 1 unit until the end of the research after remaining stable 2 month. In contrast, the grade of expenses began at 6 million $ which declined steadily to 1 unit in every 4 months and in December its proportion was approximately 3 million $, that's almost a half of the starting point.

The provided line chart This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizesportrays
describes
 figures of sales and expenses. The info is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
millions
 of $ and indicates a spin of time which Possible spelling mistake found.equalsequips
equils
 to a year.

Overall
, the ratio of sales ascended experiencing a dramatic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 fluctuations, while expenses overcame a gradual decrease.

The rate of sales This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 at 3 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 $ which increased dramatically
 two times, that's to say 6 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 $ in the following year. It experienced This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 fluctuations during the time from February to June. Then descended to 1 unit until the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the research after remaining stable 2 Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: "months".months
month
. In contrast
, the grade of expenses began at 6 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 $ which declined steadily
 to 1 unit in every 4 months and in December its proportion was approximately 3 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 $, that's almost a half of the starting point. 