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The line graph describe the informations about past and future financial situation in four different types of various of New Zealand from 2012 to 2022. It is measured by millions.

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The line graph describe the informations about past and future financial situation in four different types of various of New Zealand from 2012 to 2022. It is measured by millions. Overall, it is shows that rate revenue and user charges are predicted increase in all over the period. whereas, borrowing and grants and Subsidies are slightly declined. In 2012, rates revenue and user charges increased slowly till 2018. After that they are followed similar trend till 2022. Rates revenue stood at below 1500 millions in 2012, after that it remains stable till 2013 but it is expected to grow to 2. 4 millions dollors in 2022. While, the rate revenue and user charges are increased in 2022 compared 2012. Further analysing the graph, Borrowing shows fluctuated in all time of period. It was started figure around 9. 0 millions in 2012. Following that it was reached in 2014 nearly 1200 millions but after that many fluctuated figure remained same in 2022. On the other hand, grants and subsidies was below 500 millions in 2012. It continuesly stable in 2015 after that it was slightly increase in 2016 around 800 millions. Therefore grants and subsidies significantly dropped in 2022 just below 500 millions.
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