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Process of cloth Production

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The diagram illustrates how cloth and clothes are produced from cotton. At least, there are eight steps to get perfect cotton clothes sold at a shop today. In the first stage, cottons are harvested from the cotton plants by tractors. After that, these harvested cottons are put into the gin which separate the seeds to get seedless bales of cotton. Then, bales are sent to the blower machine to remove the unwanted particles and cleaned cottons are introduced to the carding machines. Furthermore, with the help of spinning machines, cotton is turned into yarn to get threads. At the sixth stage, these cotton threads are transformed to cloth by using a loom. Later then pure cloth is dyed into various colours with a dye vet. After all these steps, as a final stage coloured cloth is produced into a variety of clothing such as shirts, dresses, shorts, pants and so on.
The diagram illustrates how
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cloth
and
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clothes
are produced
from cotton. At least, there are eight steps to
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get
perfect cotton
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clothes
sold at a shop
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today
.

In the
first
stage, cottons
are harvested
from the cotton plants by tractors. After that, these harvested cottons
are put
into the gin which separate the seeds to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
seedless bales of cotton. Then, bales are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
to the blower machine to remove the unwanted particles and cleaned cottons
are introduced
to the carding machines.
Furthermore
, with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of spinning machines, cotton
is turned
into yarn to
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get
threads.

At the sixth stage, these cotton threads
are transformed
to
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cloth
by using a loom.
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Later then
pure
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cloth
is dyed
into various
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colours
with a dye vet.
After all
these steps, as a final stage
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coloured
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cloth
is produced
into a variety of clothing such as shirts, dresses, shorts, pants and
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so
on.
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IELTS academic Process of cloth Production

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  American English
3 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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