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the flow chart shows the detailed process of using digital technology

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The given chart illustrates the process of using digital devices to produce digital photographs, including the role of digital camera, smart card, computer and finally the photo printer Overall, the process consists of 4 stages, commencing with capturing images and finishing with printing photos. At the very beginning of the process, the image is captured by a digital camera which can also record a series of images. After being captured, the photo is recorded in a smart card. In the next step, information which is stored in a smart card is downloaded to a computer. Once the image is downloaded, it is edited by being cut, improved or formatted in a computer. Following this step, the edited photo is sent through via emails or stored in a CD. Finally, the photo is transmitted to a printer which is added some photo paper into printed into color photos or black and white optionally
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chart illustrates the process of using digital devices to produce digital photographs, including the role of digital camera, smart card, computer and
finally
the
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photo
printer

Overall
, the process consists of 4 stages, commencing with capturing
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images
and finishing with printing photos.

At the
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beginning of the process, the
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image
is captured
by a digital camera which can
also
record a series of
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images
. After
being captured
, the
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photo
is recorded
in a smart card. In the
next
step, information which
is stored
in a smart card
is downloaded
to a computer. Once the
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image
is downloaded
, it
is edited
by being
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cut
,
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improved
or formatted in a computer.

Following this step, the edited
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photo
is
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sent
through via emails or stored in a CD.
Finally
, the
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photo
is transmitted
to a printer which is
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added
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some
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photo
paper into printed into color
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photos
or black and white
optionally

IELTS academic the flow chart shows the detailed process of using digital technology

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