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The line graph depicts the Tourist Information Office accept the number of enquiries in a city for six months from January to June in 2011.

The line graph depicts the Tourist Information Office accept the number of enquiries in a city for six months from January to June in 2011. Overall, in-person was the most subtantial way to enquery and followed by telephone way. Both of them experienced upward trends instead of by letter that suffered downward trend through the period. In the beginning, in-person started low by only 400 times and then extremely soared at above 1800 times in June. furthermore, that was followed by telephone which began from over 800 and then rose to 1600 times in June. Interestingly, letter surpassed in-person way at about 600 and 800 times in between February and March. Lastly, letter way started from slightly under 800 times and then went down significantly at under 400 times in May and then it remained steady at the end of the period. in addition, letter was the least way that people used to enquiry to Tourist Information Centre.

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enquiries
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enquery
 and followed by telephone way. Both of them experienced upward trends instead
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letter
 that suffered downward trend through the period.

In the beginning, in-person This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 low by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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times
 and then extremely
 soared at above 1800 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
times
 in June. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFurthermore
furthermore
, that was followed
 by telephone which began from over 800 and then rose to 1600 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
times
 in June. Interestingly
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsign
letter
 surpassed in-person way at about 600 and 800 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
times
 in between February and March.

Lastly
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsign
letter
 way This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 from slightly
 under 800 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
times
 and then went down significantly
 at under 400 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
times
 in May and then it remained steady at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIn
in
 addition, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsign
letter
 was the least way that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
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enquiry
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Centre
. 