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The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone call in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting a reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given bar chart illustrates how many minutes spent on three categories of call types including local, national and international, and mobiles in the UK between 1995 and 2002. Overall, the local-fixed line had the largest number over the timeframe and followed by national and international fixed lines and then mobile. Also, the difference in the total number of minutes between them decreased remarkably in 2002, by comparison, previous years. Regarding the two categories of fixed-line calls, Britians had local calls about twice as much as national and international calls in 1995. In addition, it increased from 70 billion minutes to 90 billion minutes in 1999, while after that year, declined and again reached about 70 in 2002. On contrary, national and international calls witnessed a gradual rise from roughly 35 to just over 60 billion minutes over a seven-year period. Turning to the mobile call type, in the year 1995, Britians spent well under 10 billion minutes on mobile, whereas it claimed significantly and reached around 45 billion minutes, But it was still the least one compared to two fixed-line call types in 2002.
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bar chart illustrates how
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minutes spent on three categories of
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types including local,
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and
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, and mobiles in the UK between 1995 and 2002.

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line had the largest number over the timeframe and followed by
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lines and then mobile.
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in 2002, by comparison, previous years.

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Britians
had local
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about twice as much as
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and
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international
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in 1995.
In addition
, it increased from 70
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minutes to 90
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minutes in 1999, while after that year, declined and again reached about 70 in 2002. On contrary,
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national
and
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international
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calls
witnessed a gradual rise from roughly 35 to
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over 60
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minutes over a seven-year period.

Turning to the mobile
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type, in the year 1995,
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Britians
spent well under 10
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minutes on mobile, whereas it claimed
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minutes,
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types in 2002.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone call in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.

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