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The chart represents the amount spent on consumer goods in two europian countrys's (French and U.K) in the year 2010. Summarize the following in your own word. Write above 150 words

The chart represents the amount spent on consumer goods in two europian countrys's (French and U. K) in the year 2010. Summarize the following in your own word. Write above 150 words dlj5K

The chart Illustrates the amount of money spent on consumer goods (Cars, Computers, Books, Perfumes and Cameras) in France and U. K, in the year 2010. The Units are measured in Pounds Stearing. Overall, both the country's spend most of the amount in Purchasing Cars. Compaetivly, both French citizens spend the least amount on purchasing Cameras. British people send the Least amount on the purchase of Perfumes. In terms of Cars the British people send the most money, 450, 000 where as the French people spend a little less. While coming to books 400, 000 is pent in purchasing it in the U. K, France people spend about 300, 000. In the U. K the expenditure on cameras is (Aproximetly 360, 000) double than France, which is 150, 000. On the other hand, the amount sent/paid on other goods is higher in France. Above 350, 000 is spent on computers in France, where it is low in U. K. Both the Country's (France and U. K) very little amount in buying Perfumes. The British People spend around 180, 000 and French people spend a little more when compared which is 20, 000

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