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The given table illusrates information about on the result of questionnaire

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The given table illusrates information about on the result of questionnaire, which includes the questions asked to people traveling abroad about whether they have traveled, and the aim of their trips between 1994 and 1998. Other graph had a upward trend at the same time. provides information about the point of arrival at the same time. Overall, we look at the table, it can be seen that travel which is made had by far the most imporant number of people given every year. Moreover, the location which is Western Europe had the most popular from 1994 to 1998. Initially, getting back to the detail, we can see that, the number of the purpose travelling of UK residents increased significantly, which was approximatly 15, 246 and 20. 700, respectively by year by. There was fluctuate in the number of travelers for other reasons. Otherwise, the number of people going to Europe has increased dramatically, which was nearly 20000 and just under 25000, respectively. The number of visits to other countries is almost the same which was nearly 2500 during the given period.
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illusrates
information about on the result of questionnaire, which includes the questions asked to
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people
traveling abroad about whether they have traveled, and the aim of their trips between 1994 and 1998. Other graph had
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a
upward trend at the same time.
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provides
information about the point of arrival at the same time.

Overall
, we look at the table, it can be
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that travel which
is made
had by far the most
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imporant
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number
of
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people
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given
every year.
Moreover
, the location which is Western Europe had the most popular from 1994 to 1998.

Initially
, getting back to the detail, we can
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see
that, the
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number
of the purpose travelling of UK residents increased
significantly
, which was
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approximatly
15, 246 and 20. 700,
respectively
by year by. There was
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in the
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number
of travelers for other reasons.
Otherwise
, the
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number
of
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people
going to Europe has increased
dramatically
, which was
nearly
20000 and
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just
under 25000,
respectively
. The
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number
of visits to other countries is almost the same which was
nearly
2500 during the
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given
period.
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IELTS academic The given table illusrates information about on the result of questionnaire

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
181 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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