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he given table illustrates information about the sales of restaurant which is a tiny place in a town center business zone between 7th October and 13th October.

he given table illustrates information about the sales of restaurant which is a tiny place in a town center business zone between 7th October and 13th October. GNJ9o
The given table illustrates information about the sales of restaurant which is a tiny place in a town center business zone between 7th October and 13th October. Overall, when we look at the table, it can be seen that daily dinner costs more expensive than the price of daily lunch. Initially, getting back to the in detail, we can see that lunch price has the highest value on Wednesday, which is 2. 400, while the lowest sales is on Sunday for lunch. Moreover, when we dig in the dinner discount, the sales of on Friday, which has the most significant value, is 4. 350. The lowest price is on Sunday, which is 2. 450 in the same category. In addition, genrally, price cut of weekend are lower than weekdays sales.
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of restaurant which is a tiny place in a town center business zone between 7th October and 13th October.

Overall
, when we look at the table, it can be
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that daily dinner costs more expensive than the
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of daily lunch.

Initially
, getting back to the in detail, we can
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that lunch
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has the highest value on Wednesday, which is 2. 400, while the lowest
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sales
is on Sunday for lunch.
Moreover
, when we dig in the dinner discount, the
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sales
of on Friday, which has the most significant value, is 4. 350. The lowest
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price
is on Sunday, which is 2. 450 in the same category.
In addition
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genrally
,
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of weekend are lower than weekdays
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IELTS academic he given table illustrates information about the sales of restaurant which is a tiny place in a town center business zone between 7th October and 13th October.

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